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PostSubject: tamastix's RP Profile   Wed Mar 06, 2013 12:07 am

A short brief story of Shonvo Wiggle Bottom...
Shonvo Wiggle Bottom, was a young elf baby that was stolen from his village one day. His village was pillaged and burned to the ground. One day he grew up to be a king of one hundred-thousand men and one thousand royal guards. Until one day the dark forces took over. You see one day he was practicing his archery in the battle arena, against any challenger who dare face him. He would ninja up walls and shoot arrows like he was the Bruce Lee of his time, but with a bow and arrows. But one day he shot a villager in the stands arena and he became evil too and that's when it all started...



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PostSubject: Re: tamastix's RP Profile   Wed Mar 06, 2013 12:36 pm

WOW, where to start man.....

you seem to be able to become a king overnight? or over unmentioned years? sorry that doesn't really flow in a rp sense or a realistic setting. You can take anyone who dared face you, bet you can't take Neubia.

You were a seemingly normal king, but then became evil from shooting a villager in the stands? of which you "ninjed" up like the "Bruce Lee" of your time?

In Stalgath there is no Bruce Lee... and shouldn't really use it as you rp profile is set and written under rp lore and setting e.g Mr Lee didn't exist.

plus if you were such a good archer how the hell did you accidentally shoot a villager?

Please re do it we don't care for spelling mistake, grammar or even if its no lord of the ring's best seller! That can all be edited or spell checked!

But if it don't make sense, not even in the slightest. Its a redo I'm afraid.


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