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 Fabricius Priscus - RP Profile

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Character Name: Fabricius Priscus
Town: Easthedge

PostSubject: Fabricius Priscus - RP Profile   Tue Mar 19, 2013 4:58 pm

Fabricus Priscus (italian name)
He was born in a small human settlement on the outer edges of the world.
Fabricus was a smart boy when he was a child and was often teased because of that, he grew up with a small group of friends (3) who were smart too and have been bullied.
His parents were high in the running of the village being on the counsel for changes in the village. His Mother is Claduis and his father is Titius.
His father is in the local military and wishes for fabricius to become a high rank in the military when he is older. His mother Cladius is the average house wife watching over him and his brother and cleaning her husbands armour.
Fabricius has one brother, Ace he has really bonded with his brother and is never seen fighting with him, he is younger than Fabricius but looks the same age as him. Fabricius has been trained in the militia with a bow and dagger, he always goes out hunting to bring back food for his family and to sell onto the locals. He would stand back and fire his bow if anyone picked a fight with him but if he didn't have his bow he would have to run from the fight for he never had strong punching arms. he is allergic to wild yellow daffadils.
He would only drink on special occasions to keep optimal fitness for his work in the militia. He was once attacked by a drunk old man who swung a knife at him he retaliated with shooting him with and arrow in the stomach and leaving him to die which he was imprisoned for three weeks in. He would rather live in a deep underground cave with his bow and hundreds of arrows than build a house out of desert cacti. He has a birth mark on his shoulder of a x or a cross some say it is the devils mark while other think it is a sign from god.
People would consider Fabricius to be a weak fraile man but actually he is a strong bodied able man. When animals see Fabricius they can smell the blood of other slaughtered animals so they run as far and fast as they can away from him. If fabricius is lost in a forest he climbs the closest tree and looks out to see where he is or to see his village. Fabricius would rather a hot climate for his village is located near a river in a small jungle. Fabricius has good teeth for his fathers friend was a dentist before he became a soilder. Fabricius has a small growing beard but he shaves once every week so that dosen't affect his apperance. Fabricius cannot sleep during the day and is a light sleep for when he has nightmares about orcs raiding the village so he listens for every sound and if there is any little noise he is up with the torch and searching the house for "orcs". He eats what he hunts or gathers is it beef or is beetroot he will eat it he knows the different poisionous plants and meats for he has spent most of his life in the woods. His hands are clean fresh hands because he dosen't do much work aside from hold a bow and let go of a bow his hands may be dirty at times after he has been gathering vegetables. He was sent to the dungeons once after shooting a drunk old man with his bow in the stomach and leaving him to die he was only in there once. Fabricius completely despises of orcs and has nightmares about them raiding his village and burning it to the ground.
His greatest fault is not growing up with many friends and he has alright social skills so it is hard for him to get what he needs of people or make deals with merchants. Fabricius's biggest goal is becoming mayor of his village and ruling over it with his knowledge and wisdom to maximise the performance of the village. If fabricius was to give someone advice he would say "Cavete a Orci" (Beware of the orcs). His favourite thing to do is to go out into the local forest and hunt all day. He has not wrote a book since he was very young (12) he wrote a diary about himself. Fabricius is looking for a wife at the moment.

Thank you all for reading my Roleplay profile




There was something about getting your story approved and is this it?
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PostSubject: Re: Fabricius Priscus - RP Profile   Wed Mar 20, 2013 9:47 am

Firstly I want to note that you are very eager to get on the server and that is fantastic, this is good enough to pass but I'd just like to point some stuff out.

The story here seems to be identical to the one in your whitelist app which is a bit upsetting as you could have really gone all out here and shown us the path your character has walked and where he wants to walk!

Please also keep in mind that you character seems to be a "bad-ass" and I use the word sarcastically so remember to tone it down when playing or it will ruin rp depth etc etc.

Well done, once again its a pass.
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Character Name: Fabricius Priscus
Town: Easthedge

PostSubject: Re: Fabricius Priscus - RP Profile   Wed Mar 20, 2013 11:35 am

Confessor_Tom wrote:
Firstly I want to note that you are very eager to get on the server and that is fantastic, this is good enough to pass but I'd just like to point some stuff out.

The story here seems to be identical to the one in your whitelist app which is a bit upsetting as you could have really gone all out here and shown us the path your character has walked and where he wants to walk!

Please also keep in mind that you character seems to be a "bad-ass" and I use the word sarcastically so remember to tone it down when playing or it will ruin rp depth etc etc.

Well done, once again its a pass.

Sorry I thought this was the place I was supposed to put up my character description to get it accepted? (is there villages?)
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PostSubject: Re: Fabricius Priscus - RP Profile   Wed Mar 20, 2013 1:48 pm

It is you are in the right place, but I was pointing out that it mirrored the one that was on your whitelist app already. Just wanted to say that you could have gone into more depth in this thread which is dedicated to your character's past and future.
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Character Name: Fabricius Priscus
Town: Easthedge

PostSubject: Re: Fabricius Priscus - RP Profile   Wed Mar 20, 2013 1:51 pm

Confessor_Tom wrote:
It is you are in the right place, but I was pointing out that it mirrored the one that was on your whitelist app already. Just wanted to say that you could have gone into more depth in this thread which is dedicated to your character's past and future.

Ahh okay, I shall have a new cd when I get white-listed and see how the server is but I will be changing my application.
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